Whose Line is it Anyway?: A Quickie on Perspective

Apart from how much I’ve agonized over what to put in the story, I think I’ve experienced the most stress over how best to TELL the story. Or, to be more precise, WHO should be telling it.

I’ll spare us the refresher course in creative writing and suffice it to say that “perspective” is the vantage point from which a story is told. It is relevant, however, to review the options:

First Person – The narrator uses ‘I’, and the story is told from their unique (and often biased) perspective.

Second Person – The narrator uses ‘you’, and addresses the reader.
Third Person Limited – The narrator uses ‘they’, and the story is told from the perspective of a focal character.

Third Person Multiple – The narrator uses ‘they’, and can focus on multiple characters.

Third Person Omniscient – The narrator uses ‘they’, and the story can be told from any and all angles, switching perspective as needed, with knowledge of the entire world within the story.

Deciding which of these was my best course of action has been hell. On the one hand, a writer considers her strengths. I have been told and several occasions that I write most lyrically from a first person perspective, but the margin for prejudicial narrative always bothered me, and with such a large cast of characters, no one character was equipped to tell the entire story. The amount of switching between perspectives would have given the reader a headache.

My main cast has seven characters, all of whom have a unique experience of the events in the story. Each of them has a bias has tells parts of the story the way they need to be told. Third person omniscience was an option, of course, but it felt cold. Like a coroner’s report. And, as discussed before, I didn’t have it in me to let seven different people take turns talking about how they see the world. I could have done it, but I would have hated myself for it.

What I needed, was a way to give the microphone to seven different voices, along with their essential doses of bias, without letting everyone spend a chapter at a time talking about themselves.

In the end, I opted for a mix between the two: third person limitation, with a switch between character narratives as the chapters progressed. And to be honest, it was when I saw George R. R. Martin do it that I knew I wasn’t a crazy person for thinking it could pan out, even with so many voices to whom I must do justice.

How do you decide upon the perspective used in a given story? Do you default more often to a strength, or does it vary by content? Can you describe a time this process was difficult?

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About RicoChey

I'm just an unmarried, childless, thirty-something high school dropout with big ideas and a small attention span. Weave drunkenly behind me as I meander through my own life: a winding path of musings on life, relationships, food, the few politics I can stomach discussing, and probably really dumb stuff like the ratio of Sex and the City episodes wherein Carrie does and does not appear to be wearing extensions.
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3 Responses to Whose Line is it Anyway?: A Quickie on Perspective

  1. Choosing perspective has only given me trouble once — the other times there was no choice at all, I just knew. Since early spring I’ve struggled off an on with a story that made total sense in first person when I started out… but there is a lot of action which becomes problematic (at least for me) in a first person POV.

    Choosing perspective is almost harder than choosing a title!!


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